Esmé

Color

Thank you guys so much for criiquing and your time, I really, really appreciate it. Darklight: As to the phantom, that was (a bit) explained in part one. Cat is ...

Water

Well

Lol, welcome to YWS, hope you have fun. If you have any questions, feel free to PM me. Hope to see your work posted, -elein

Bell

Hair

Okay, I really don’t wan to start any kind of discussion as far as spelling goes, that has already been done, lol. Bear with me if I do, though. I ...

... *Sadness* -Why didn't I come to the site before you took FREAK off? Huh, why? Why, why, why? ??? *Sadness again* The book had better be out quick, lol. ...

Quote: From the moment Jerome woke up that Friday morning he could feel that something strange was going to happen. Comma would be useful somewhere up there. Quote: He did ...

Hm... Okay, I admit. I just skimmed this. But what I saw scared me. a) Punctuation b) Grammar I'm not saying that I'm perfect or something, but I really think ...

Mass

Ideas - ah, I have to much of them. Usually the problem is writing them all down and actually choose one of them, haha. I don't really have any method, ...

... I don't live in Britain, hehe, I guess I'll have to wait a bit longer! But its still better than for most of my friends, who'll have to wait ...

Hi, welcome to YWS, hope you have fun. Ah, LotR - love it also. Lol. If you have any questions feel free to PM me, elein