Esmé

Battle

O wow. *Cringes* But nice one anyway. I think. *Contemplates* 8/10

O wow. Nice. Really nice. O_o

Woot for Poland :) :) :) :) Oh yeah. Yay. Woot again.

'Y'? *Raises eyebrows* New category: Plants Sunflower

Okay, so my previous crits were of the nitpicky/grammar/typos kind of ones. I suppose they don’t do much to the writer, but I love them nevertheless. Character and/or plot opinion ...

SHE KILLED STRICK?!

I skipped the entire first part. No spoiler wanted, grrr. Bad, bad spoilers. Soo tempting. :( Keep writing !!!

Finally have enough time to read this! Haha, first thing once I got on the site… Quote: Creiha, the sun is shining for you. You are not a doormat, so ...

??? What is this doing here?

Shortest chapter? Too bad, lol. Quote: “I can’t move on. We have to stop,” she muttered in a wavering voice, and, for a moment, she thought she saw Sray-Valom in ...

Well okay, so I couldn’t keep away… *Sticks out tongue* Quote: She shivered at the freezing dew stinging her face and unconsciously pulled a cloth that didn’t smell familiar around ...

‘llo, How’re you? Basically it’s the title that made me come here, it sounded so cool, lol. I’ll be writing the critique as I read. Prologue Quote: Failing fires flickered ...

4/10 I don't know, I don't really like it...

Czesc - That's in Polish :) Anyways, welcome to YWS, I'll chorus everyone here. Hope you have fun! Looking forwards to see your writing, -elein