Esmé

My nominations: Twilight - Stephanie Meyers The Witcher series - Andzrej Sapkowski Green Rider - Kristen Britain Also, echoing what has already been said: His Dark Materials and the H. ...

Chapter One - Never meet them, never irritate them There are places, in which you should never find yourself. On the windowpane of a skyscraper. Preferably the highest story. There ...

Thanks WD for reading and commenting, I so appreciate it :D I changed the margin think, but I’m still contemplating on the first sentence. *Grumbles* As to description: This was ...

swan

Yes, travel half te town in public communication in a unifrom. Great.

Two books by maurice Druon (love him). Long live M. of Burgundy Twilight, Stephanie Meyers (love her also, even more than Druon)

Me too, Lilith, me too... -For me, that is.

Stars

Lies

Hello, I’ll be writing the crit as I read, ok? Quote: Life went on as it usually did. The birds flew, the sun rose and set, and people went on. ...

Lilith: Thanks for taking your time and reading this - if you ever have anything that needs a crit, feel free to PM me. Darklight: The same :D And thanks ...

Hello, Are you new? Didn’t see you around yet, so - welcome to YWS. Okay, sorry to start out like this, but: -> Spelling : Proofread your work before submitting ...

9/10 - So cool, though a bit creepy, lol. It's staring at me...

Tall brunette, very buiness-like Isabel Oraiska

Hello, Found it, lol. :) I see you've got some very good crits, so I don’t know if I'll write anything constructive here. I'll probably just repeat what everyone said, ...