Esmé

Girl!!!!!!!!

heavy (lol...)

Exactly. *Nods head sadly*

I describe, always, because I think it is better for the reader to be able to visualize particular characters. It is also better for me, in a way, because its ...

Ch. 49..? For a moment I just froze and stared at it, really. XD Ah, and I was hoping for something nice and long… Mhm, Lusien’s here! I’ve taken a ...

WD: Yes, I think I’ll post more, but not necessarily in chronological order :S And thanks for all the reviews you’ve been giving me, they were great! … Thanks to ...

... died a long and painful death...

… And I’m on Ch. 4 (or was it three?) of Book 1... *Blinks* Internal conflict, you say, and internal conflict I see. Poor Strick. From what I gather, has/needs/should ...

Okay, I’ll start of with a nitpicky, grammar and spelling wise crit, and then I’ll give you general impressions. So, here we go: quote: Not even the wisest would suspect ...

Hello, welcome to YWS, hope you have fun here! Greeting having been done with, I really do hope you'll stay and show us your work. I go around herse as ...

I admit, I’m doing one of these for the second time. But this time I intend to end, I really do. Of course, I’m writing other things, too, but this ...

Bits

WD, as much as I hate editing, I love you. *Hugs* The minor changes have been made, but for now only the minor, since the bigger ones are, er, bigger. ...

It hurts, doesn't it? The crits and comments, I mean. Ouchie. (I'm thirteen, by the way. But shshs...) And they are supposed to. Well, maybe not, but close to that. ...

French Fries! (English, American, lol!)