Esmé

I agree. I totally agree.

6/10 Amusing in its simplicity. And then there's a pig. And a white background. :) Point for each of those.

Hello Jordan, welcome to YWS - I hope you have fun! That aside, my name is Elein, and if you have any Q's, feel free to PM me. Lol, you ...

Stevie, So I finally got to critiquing your story, yes? Sorry it took so long, but as you know, I was absent for quite a long time on YWS. As ...

Many thanks go to all who have read and critted/ read an not critted (but have read!) my story. As always, everything is appreciated. Stevie - Thanks for the impressions, ...

3/10 I like the bakground color. And the other colors, too, and the design is ok, I guess. But then, that's kind of it.

Welcome to YWS, hope you have fun! If you have any Q's, feel free to PM me.

I don't know, maybe it's cause I'm in a horrid mood, but it wasn't particularly entertaining. I saw hundreds of these already.

6/10 The background is a bit hazy, but it matches your name.

ShadowTwit, Thanks for the crit, I really appreciate it! (Most of the minor corrections have been mad,e thanks for pointing them out).

3/10 Not an anime fan, and that avatar is not quite my taste. I don't know if that's wind or rain or anything else. For the teddy, though, and animation, ...

I'll quote write me: Idiot.

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Blood on Snow “Damn you, Shay,” the woman whispered, her voice hoarse. “Damn you forever after.” Cecilie Devereux sat straight atop a massive shelf, still as a statue. Hidden in ...

Hello Hunter, The first part of the critique will be a so-called line-by-line one. After that I’ll write character impressions, and tell you what I liked/disliked. Quote: Throughout his entire ...