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PenguinAttack - thank you very very very much for the crit, and for your time! I really do appreciate you reading and critiquing this. First of all, I would like ...

10/10 Forever and for always. Love that signature XD

9/10 Love it, but trying to reaad the text for the first time is a bit hard. After that, when you actually know what it says, its awesome.

Nate - thanks. O_o I knew that if I did it once, then it could be done again, but I'm thinking real slow today... Anyway, thanks again!

Hello and welcome to YWS! This is an awesome site :) Watch out or soon you'll be addicted... Poet, eh? Cool. (Ekhm. That means that, sadly enough, I won't understand ...

Hello, First of all, I’ll admit to not reading the first part of the chapter. *Cringes* Secondly, as always, first comes the line-by-line crit, and then impressions, etc. Quote: She ...

I have this stupid question (well, maybe not a question): The featured works, in profiles. I have two of the three spots filled in, and recently I wanted to add ...

Alainna, lol, thanks very much for the crit. For a very, very, very long time (since Februaru) no one critted it, and I kind of forgot about it. 'Spirit Caller', ...

The Basement was a large, large cavern, just waiting to swallow him in its murky depths. It was here that horrible monsters lurked behind every shadow, and witches cast their ...

Hello, I distinctively remember Cra-yon Lay-onds posted on YWS, but I never did get round to critting it : ) So I’ll do this, ok? (Yes, as if you can ...

4/10 Wah >.

9/10 Very nice!

Grrr. Don’t say that. I’m talking about the ‘horrendous’ part. Oh, but lol, I see I turned into one of your faithful, puppy-like critters? Jeez, I really have to study, ...

4/10 A bit... weird? Not my liking, but I do like the 'catastrohpe' part. ;)

8/10 Lol! Amusing, very amusing.