Esmé

Hello room101, First of all, as I haven’t really seen you around yet, I would like to welcome you to YWS - this is a great, addictive (and terrifying, actually) ...

Sunny, First of all, thank you very much for your crit. Having the standard (but very from the heart!) part said, I realize what you’re saying about some of the ...

Obviously, thanks for the crit :) Sohini, Penguin - *^_^* I'll keep in mind your advice about some stanzas being childish (and that goes to the story itself, too). Cheers, ...

Usually, it's third person. Most of my stories are like that, but curretly I'm experimenting, and turned to first person. I have to say, it is weird.

I love you all! *Hugs* Also, Penguin - thanks for the crit on the poem ever so much :)

What Captain said :)

8/10 It goes with your avatar and it's interesting, for lack of any exciting vocabulary :)

Yeah, I agree with everyone before me. This is a realy awesome drawing! Sorry, it appears that I have nothing constructive to say. Cheers, Esme

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Horrid deaths, oh, nasty deaths - - lurking in the bathroom! A little cord, a bit of string, Slightly, slightly rough. A little tight, the little rope, Slung so tightly ...

8/10 Hehe (oh, but I do love the avatar...)

*^_^* Welcome to YWS - this as a great, albeit addictive, site. I go around as Esme, ad if you have any Q's, feel free to PM me. Hoping to ...

Uhm. Ekhem. I have written a lot of books. Loads and loads, stacks and stacks. Sounds impressive? It isn’t. Cause I never finish anything. Anything. *Woe is me* Currently Working ...

Well, first of all, they’re not exactly Michael’s thoughts, are they? I mean, kind of it is, but this is still first person narration. (Later on it’ll be first person, ...

PenguinAttack, So I finally got to your story. Sorry it took so long. As always, the line-by-line, boring crit will come first, and impressions and the such will be found ...