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7/10 Quite like it.

9/10 Absolutely fabtastic. Really.

3/10 I don't know... It would be good with only the firts two lines, I suppose.

Blithley, I see no one has of yer critted this piece, and I have the honor of being the first. ^_^ A line by line crit will, as always, be ...

Alainna, I’ll shamelessly copy and paste what Sumi wrote: Thank you for the PM and sorry about not 'tiquing immediately. Or, differently, I read it a while ago, just didn’t ...

Vernon, First of all (again), sorry for the delay on your crit. I was supposed to have it done days ago. Yeah, well. I don’t know if I’ll be able ...

9/10 O_o But I love it!

One paragraph? I don't know, I'd probably do nothing at all...

^ I told myself that one of these days I'll learn how to do that... Thanks for answering my unasked question!

Emily, So, here I am. As always, the line-by-line crit comes first, and the impressions/like/disliked and the such are saved for the end. Onward, then! Quote: I sat up slowly, ...

I don't know, it kind of sounds a tad bit cliche (don't kill me, lol, it isn't as if my names aren't, either...). Cowboy? Western? The whole I-have-to-save-the-town-from-bandits thing? Cecilie ...

Those are adorable… No, seriously, they are (I’m a sucker for cats). I have to say that the cat is beautiful. *Squeals* # 1 Is my personal favorite… Those sunglasses ...

O_o As in, wow. Adorable, but still weird. Weirdish-ly adorable. Cool.

Thewonderfulworldofnight, I love you. Having said that, I would like to repeat it: I love. You have just answered one of my worries concerning this piece: It has almost no ...

10/10 Always and forever. I love love love it.