Esmé

kittykat, As usual with my critiques, I’ll give you a line-by-line one first, and then I’ll move to impressions. Quote: Now if your wondering where here is, you would have ...

8/10 Pretty!

Banned for having a blue user name, when pink is prettier!

9/10 Matches my current mood, and is so beautiful.

ashley, I must say that I personally am not happy at all by the length. Grr. But, onto my critique… Quote: “Oh, what a warm welcome for an old man.” ...

ahleylee, Well, I’ve recently noticed that you have three chapters posted at the moment. Pff. Three more hours lost to you, Isadora, Nicandro and the others, yes? Feel ashamed of ...

ahleylee, Tad bit long, yes, but I know the feeling, and cutting it into pieces is like cutting yourself, yes? Irritating also, but bloody in the first place. Anyhow… to ...

Kylan, Well, here I am, reading ‘part one’ after ‘part two’. This time I come bearing something (a tad bit) constructive. Quote: Looking out of the shattered department store window, ...

Kylan, Me sitting down and writing and/or singing paeans for you, as far as your work is concerned, wouldn’t do you much good, no? Alas, nothing else is left. I ...

Porcelain, I know those line-by-line grammar critiques can be sometimes boring, but I’ll do it anyhow, just because I’m nitpicky Esme. That’ll be followed by more general quotes, and then’ll ...

Heart, That is, if you don’t mind me shortening the username. But, to the topic - your story, that is. As my current story starts in classroom also, I’m all ...

Nutty, As you yourself said, it’s terribly short and so hard to critique content-wise. But what was shown, I liked, and so a plus you get on that. The beginning ...

7/10 Original.

At the moment? "Marie Antoinette: The Journey", Antonia Frazer. I'm about two thirds through, and I'd give it five stars on five. Also, "Wuthering Heights", and I'm reading on and ...

I rarely use swear words - that refers to both the real world and my stories, unless it is particularly inventive. T’would depend on the circumstances. If the character says: ...