Esmé

In the hotel that we were staying in, they thought I was his mother. The receptionist certainly did, and giving me the keys to our room remarked what a beautiful ...

7/10 The pictures themselves are lovely, but they flash... flash... flash... I can't concentrate on one long enough to appreciate it. Not one. But, black and white, aye?

Well, yes, they aren’t too good, but for one-time reads they can do. The fact that I will buy the third book doesn’t necessarily mean that I like the series, ...

Leahweird, Witches and their familiars, aye? Well, we’ll see what you’ve got in store for me… :) Quote: Discovering what she might look like if her curls weren’t so matted, ...

Autumn, Hello. I’m Esme (obviously, but, ah, well), and today I shall be the one critiquing your piece. As usual with my reviews, you’ll get a line-by-line one first, and ...

MacDanny, Hello, my name is Esme, and I think I’ll be your first critter, at least as far this piece is concerned. I’ll start out with a line-by-line critique, and ...

KJ, So I finally got to critting something of yours, aye? I’ll probably take a look at “Needles and Roses” later on, but I opened this first, and as it ...

day tripper, I actually read this before the edits were made, but somehow never got around to critiquing it. Well, no time like the present to change that, aye? Quote: ...

ringettegirl, Hello, my name’s Esme, and today I shall be one of your story’s cirtters. As always with my critiques, you’ll get a line-by-line one first, and any impressions that ...

Bittersweet, Welcome to YWS, aye? T’is a most wonderful site, but very addictive. But, onward with your critique! Quote: His name was Julius Alexander Morfit, and his name was not ...

I saw something similar in my city. 'course, it wasn't really in English, but when you translated it from Polish, it would turn out to be something along those lines... ...

JennaLL, Welcome to YWS, aye? T’is a most wonderful sight, but very addicting. Anyway, to your story - my crits are as follows: first is the line-by-line one (read: nitpicks), ...

rubberduck, Hello there. Esme here, and it’s me who’ll have the pleasure of critting your piece. Onward, then. Quote: He needed to hear the sound of his own voice for ...

Kylan, First of all, I’d like to say that I couldn’t wait for the next installment - and here it is, making me all giddy. So, I’ll discard any attempts ...

Prideful and confident, if not a tad bit conceited. Probably is tall and has jet black hair, or at least that is how I think of him. Lefrimel.