Esmé

Rei, Hello! (is hiding a sharp, sharp knife behind her back, and is smiling happily). Soon, you shall be able to delight in my rambles, my thoughts concerning the mentioned ...

Okay, critiqued no 2. Heh... and extension isn't allowed.

6/10 It makes a sound, yes? Other than that... *feels slightly confuzzled

Bcain, I’m afraid that I can’t offer you very little constructive comments - before, though, I just echo the rest, and add my own paeans, here are some little nitpicks: ...

BigBadBear, Hey there. Esme comes bearing that crit. Quote: I never really thought about it much back then. Comma before “back”. Quote: ‘Cause I was a big boy. I don’t ...

Alainna - I was in the middle of your critiques, actually ^^ Anyway, done. BigBadBear - yours should come soon. Cheers, Esme Update: BigBadBear, the first part was critted. Update ...

Okay, no intro, let’s just consider this a continuation of the last critique. Quote: I was positive, as I turned the key in the lock that my boyfriend would be ...

Alainna, I actually did read this earlier, and had half the crit typed up, but then it just disappeared somewhere in the folder. Sowwie. Quote: “No she’s not. Is it ...

Well, I edited the first chapters. All comments and/or impressions are included in the attachments, so you can just go on and read that instead of this. Cheers! Or no. ...

Okay. I took out that part, and edited that “speech”. I reckoned that if we’re having this discussion, then I really should. Any better now? Again, thanks for all you ...

thebadthing, Admittedly, I read this a good while ago, and meant to write a critique then,, but somehow it didn’t turn out. But I’m here now, and it’s better late ...

Hey Ash. Haha I feel spoiled. All the others have yet to see more chapters of this, but I already have! (Teehee) ~Shameless Advertising~ Just you wait, fellow readers! It ...

Bittersweet, Thanks for the critique - as always all comments are greatly appreciated. However, I do want this to be a stand-alone? Can it not be a stand-alone? Or, differently, ...

GryphonFledgling, Hotel, hotel… Why, you asked, and I’d reply if I knew, really. But I don’t, and after a long, uncomfortable silence, let’s change the subject, okay? But yes, I ...

To Whom It May Concern, Since everyone else did this already, Esme though she’d do it, too. And since she very much enjoys ripping others’ work into shreds, and finding ...