Esmé

Icaruss - I made the most necessary changes have been made, and hopefully smoothened out the dialogue at some points. The bigger picture is being worked on, though how I’ll ...

Done :)

Icaruss, Random Thought #137: You do know that you are the second person who thought, at first, that this is indeed about them, the older “woman“ and younger “man“, as ...

Hey, Would you mind doing a critique for me also? Here's the link: ("Saving Michael", under Fantasy) Thanks, and cheers, Esme

JFW1415, Second installment, aye? That’s the perk of being one of the last to read. You never have to wait for the next post. *smiles. PART I Quote: We didn’t ...

JFW1415, My critique shall be as pieced as your story is, and so you’ll get impressions, likes/dislikes for each part after the line-by-line review of each piece separately, since I ...

9/10 So do I.

Sythe, Yours is done ^^ I did forget to state that I rarely do sci-fi, but since you already asked I did it. The question is, was it any good? ...

Sythe, I rarely do sci-fi crits either, simply because usually, it bores me. I’m not the robots-spaceship-futuristic kind of person, but I’ll try not to make you suffer for it, ...

No, actually I didn't :) It's criminals that I don't like - romances are okay, in my book. So I'll probably have to get my hands on them in the ...

Ashley, Chapter five, aye? *is happy with how dedicated Ashley is* Onward, then. Quotes: I find no excitement, however Evander expresses his every day at dinner. That sentence should be ...

I forgot about it.

Hey, mind critiquing mine? It' called "Saving Michael", and can be found under Fantasy, though here's the link:

Ashley, Thanks, thanks, thanks for critiquing, because all comments are needed and appreciated. Thanks for your time! As to continuations, though… I don’t think there will be one. This was ...

Swottielottie, I do love your avatar, you know? Or, if you didn’t, you now do. But, onward with your critique. Quote: She saw the cruel face of the dark sorcerer…. ...