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Aw, but see, I can’t exactly answer that question, since I don’t really (no specifics) know where you are going with this (turning point reference). I only ever know what ...

Ashley - Here’s my critique for Ch 7. I confess, I read it some time ago, but was very, very lazy lately, and so you get it now, not that ...

'til looks much more becoming ^_^

BigBadBear - So I finally got around to critiquing this… Sorry for the wait, but finals were murdering me ^_^ Quote: Not here you can’t. Yes, yes, dialogue, I know, ...

Very deserved :)

Bittersweet , Sorry, sorry, sorry for me taking so long to critique this, especially since I read it ages ago. Or rather, I did review it earlier (a few days ...

6/10 I love all the elements separately, but not so much when put together. It's, well, a pretty picture. Pretty, though, and point for that.

BigBadBear - I’ll cut the apologies for the delay and continue with the critique ^^ Quote: Now all that was left were notes. Very nice. 1) Are the characters credible? ...

Well, I didn’t really take GSCEs, but my test was an equivalent of sorts… I had to write a characteristic (is that the correct word?) of one character from a ...

Ashley - you remind me that I have a lot of stuff of my own to revise… I cringe at the very thought. I mean, I’m halfway, but it’s torture. ...

Ashley - after some delay, but I’m here. T’would be impossible for me to stay away any longer, heh. Quote: Lyra helps me dress, as usual. Today, I wear more ...

BigBadBear - after a fashion, but I’m here : ) Sorry for the delay! Quote: Mom wouldn’t suddenly throw me into the car and drive me here. Ah, but we ...

Wisemann210 - hello, welcome to YWS. It’s a very, very, very addicting site (yes, that was a warning, heh). But, before I continue with your review - there’s one very ...

HC - hello and welcome to YWS. It’s an awesome and very, very, very addicting site : ) But, onward with your review, no? (sorry for the delay - you ...

After a fashion, but everything finished :)