Esmé

KJ, Yes, Chapter 6 was amongst By Sun, By Moon. Queer, no? But, it’s seven that counts now, and with seven we now continue (: *** Quote: and even if ...

Hikaro, Wow. ^^ Thanks for the compliments, I didn’t realize anyone would still be reading this (: But I’ll get back to it, one day, maybe… Ooo, finally someone is ...

KJ, Er. There’s no Chapter 6! I mean, there is, now, but I couldn’t access it through Ch 5. Anyone ever told you that Esme is totally unprepared to for ...

KJ - Lol, this is going pretty fast, isn’t it? But it’s so awesome! *** Quote: Like while I was sleeping, I was aware that I was sleeping. Very nice ...

KJ - Here again, ‘cause I can’t stay away. Wonderful tale you’re spinning here. *** Quote: It was more torturous than standing outside and getting bit by mosquitoes over and ...

KJ, Greetings once more^^ I’m just gobbling up you chapters (: *** Quote: And after walking aimlessly for a while, hoping for a sight of some fortune-telling shop, I realized ...

KJ, Ello. Ch. 2, which I also read way, way back, shall now be formally critiqued (: **** Quote: And as I sat up, I saw there were not any ...

KJ, Hello (: I know this has been out for quite some times, but it seems I rarely actually critique something right away. I mean, I read it when it ...

Sworddance, Oooh, vampires! You should have me hooked for that reason alone, lol, since I’ve been nursing an obsession for quite some time. Rubs hands together* Quote: The body dropped ...

Lotti, Welcome to YWS. It’s a wonderfully addictive site ^_^. Anyway, your critique, since this is what we post stories for, no? First of all, Kaylyn said some very useful ...

Rowan, Wow. Twenty six chapters? I’ve never made it that far… But, I will, I really will… *mutters under breath. Anyway, your book. ^^ Let’s continue, yes? *** Quote: It ...

Hello, My name’s Esme, and I’ll be your critiquer (: No, I haven’t read the previous installments, but the pre-chapter info was really helpful! Anyway, here’s my critique. I did ...

Hey, This piece caught my eye me in the first place because the name “Magda” pops up in my story, also. So of course I was interested what someone else ...

^_^ Notice, m'dears, that the critiques that you are getting - will get, eh - are rather delayed. That is due to a major (unfortunate) lack of time on my ...

Ashley - took me a while, but here I am. As always, I read it almost as soon as you posted, but you’re reading the words of a hopelessly lazy ...