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Cris, Hello again (: Quote: I was locked in my own mind, I had already been to hell and back. Odd. Consider: “I was locked in my own mind, having ...

Warrior, Hello! Welcome to YWS - I hope you’ll love it here (: To your critique, though: Quote: ..."In other news..." “… in other new…” Quote: ..."A thirteen-year-old kid today ...

Anhirke, Ello, how are you on this ever so cloudy day? Do you know that it’s raining? Horrid, no? Ah, but your review^^ Quote: The sky today was properly grey ...

Sunny, Hello! I don’t think we’ve ever met - but welcome to YWS (: Your review, though: I think that Nutty covered the grammar issues, so I won’t be repeating ...

Reuben, Ello! How are you on this very cloudy day? I trust that well C: To you review, though: Quote: What?” Will asked fast. Quickly. Quote: But not even a ...

Kool, Hello! How are you on this cloudy day? Hopefully well (: Quote: There’s no real love in the world, and with the decline of love came the decline of ...

Lozzen, Hello! How are you? I trust that well. Quote: Words whispered through dry pink lips, telling a story, painting a story, showing a story, to the many imaginary people ...

Antara, Hello! How’s it that no one has critiqued this yet, hmm? Quote: I lay in bed now thinking of them. Awkward phrasing. Quote: I go through my day and ...

Olivia, Hello. How are you? Hopefully well (: Anyway, to your review. Quote: Her hair is the colour of Autumn. Capitalizing this struck me as a bit odd. See, if ...

Cris, Hello! Welcome to YWS! Before I start on your review, though, I want to say something. See, I noticed your review count is 0. That’s not good, because the ...

Queen, Hello! Welcome to YWS - hopefully you’ll come to love this site ^^ First thing first, though - there’s a rule as far as posting stories is concerned. To ...

kjnhbtegvwLittleford, Hello - welcome to YWS! This is a wonderfully addicting site (: However, there is a rule around here that says you can only post your own stuff once ...

Littleford, Hello - welcome to YWS! This is a wonderfully addicting site (: However, there is a rule around here that says you can only post your own stuff once ...

Ahley, Hello! How’ve you been? Good, hopefully. Anyway, here’s the review: Quote: Of Nicandro’s disobedience and how she says it will bring doom to him if he doesn’t calm his ...

Very pretty effects on a very, very pretty person (: