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  • Romantic Novels Re: Forest People Pt. 1

    Running, Hello! ‘scuse me for the username, but I’m not going to type out the whole thing, and I don’t fancy calling anyone “devil” ^^ So “running” you are. Anyway, ...

    Sep 25, 2008
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: The Last Dance

    CJeanene, I think - actually, I’m thinking of your zero review count. Er, yeah. See, to post anything at all, you need to write at least 2 reviews for other ...

    Sep 25, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Not a Life (working title)

    Wessie, Hello! How are you on this ever so warm autumn day? Anyway, before I review your piece, something very important. Very, very important. The 2:1 ratio. See, before you ...

    Sep 25, 2008
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: NightBlind

    Kamor, Hello! How are you on this oddly sunny day? And can you imagine that it’s warm, too? I mean, the last two days were positively horrid! And today was ...

    Sep 25, 2008
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: My Frozen Blood

    Quibbons, Hello! And interesting username you have, you know? I like it ^^ Quote: The air hung with the fumes that poured from the factories, a dark world surrounded the ...

    Sep 24, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Trains

    Dunnskee, In desperate need of overwhelmingly positive reviews, hmm? Oh, pshh. Overwhelmingly positive reviews aren’t cool. Quote: I rode each day, and saw the same fields, fish ponds, and farm ...

    Sep 23, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Alvalor 1.3

    Anna, Hello! How are you on this lovely, horridly rainy day? Yesterday was cloudy, and only raining a little bit, and today, can you imagine, it’s both cloudy and rainy? ...

    Sep 23, 2008
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: More Green Ribbons

    Miss Feckless, Hello! And did you know that it’s still raining? I mean, it was raining yesterday, when I forgot my umbrella, and it was raining earlier on today, when ...

    Sep 23, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: Welcome New Members!

    Hello, welcome to YWS! I hope you'll love it here :) If you ever have any questions, feel free to PM me. Cheers!

    Sep 22, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Untouched Ch. 2

    Jasmine, Ello again. Hopefully you are you’re fine on this cloudy, cloudy day - well, night. But cloudy it still is… And it rained today, you know? And I forgot ...

    Sep 22, 2008
  • Romantic Novels Re: Chapter 1 of Queen Esmeralda

    deafwriter, Hello! Wondering why this piece caught my attention, hmm? Lol. Anyway, your critique: Quote: But there were still so many. Okay, this might be me, but I don’t get ...

    Sep 22, 2008
  • General Articles Re: Felony assault with a bucket

    Hershey, Lol. That is probably the most constructive comment you’ll get from me - felony indeed, not nice at all. Poor teacher, though I imagine your mom was in a ...

    Sep 22, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Looking Glass Prologue

    Kaylynn, Hello! How are you on this ever so cloudy day - well, know evening..? Hopefully well (: Quote: She glanced behind her and saw a Shadow, she had to ...

    Sep 22, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: My Boyfriends a Moongod - Chapter 2

    Gracee, Hello! How are you on this cloudy, ever so cloudy day? Me, I think I have a cold, but never mind that now. To your critique. Oo, the dialogue ...

    Sep 22, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Serendipity In Hell; 1

    Sunshine. Hello! How are you on this cloudy, cloudy day? I trust that good. (: Quote: Another peaceful sleep rudely interrupted, he thought wryly, opening his eyes so that they ...

    Sep 22, 2008


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