Esmé

5/10 Maybe (:

Eh, I know this wasn’t too good - I kind of gave up on this story a long time ago. But thanks, thanks for the review, I’ll keep all this ...

Quibbons, Ello ^^ Quote: Robert was getting impatient, he took a last gulp of tea, which was now stone cold and looked around once more for the Doctor. Run-on. First ...

Bianca, Hello! How are you on this lovely, lovely evening? Quote: That’s because our rendezvous is late at night where no one else is around. “no one else” again Quote: ...

BrokenWings, Hello! Welcome to YWS! I hope you’ll like it here (: But, before I start with your critique… You review count is zero, which means you haven’t written a ...

Lying - lying seems so… so blunt, you know? The world, theoretically, could get rid of that “lying”, but that wouldn’t mean that there wouldn’t be any lies out there. ...

Continuation. Well, interesting. I like where you’re going with this, there’s a plot developing. But I think it could have been written better, you know? I mean, I loved the ...

Elektrisk, Hello! How are you on this lovely, lovely day? I trust that well (; Anyway, to your review: Quote: This was a rather frivolous task, because he never. stops. ...

Gracee, Hello! How are you on this horribly lovely day? I hope that well (: Anyway, the line-by-line crit’s been already done, and I won’t repeat what’s already been said. ...

winnie603, Hello! How’re you on this lovely, lovely day? Because, it’s a fantastic day. An awesome day. I think I’ll start singing ^^ La-la-la-laa la-la! Anyway, first thing first: Your ...

KJ, So you whipped up another story, yes? Started reading as soon as I saw it, lol - that’s the effect your writing has on me. *grumbles. You’re evil like ...

Anonamuse, Hello! How are you on this lovely day? (: To your critique, though. Quote: His desire fulfilled he pulled his trousers back up as he stood; Comma after “fulfilled”. ...

Ladylark, Hello! How are you? I hope that fine ^^ Anyway, to your critique: Quote: The young man beckoned to her, his dazzling grey eyes danced with excitement. Times. “dancing” ...

Sunshine, Hello! I don’t have much to say at the moment - the weather’s still good, lol - so I’ll just proceed with your critique^^ Quote: A sharp gasp escaped ...

4/10 For the first five seconds okay, but then I came to realize that I don't like that Sponge guy, and the animation gets tiring.