Esmé

No, no, for once no! The user below me likes pink.

Diamond, Hello! Hopefully you don’t mind me shortening your username, but I tried typing it out and eventually got irritated with the over usage of backspace. But your story, yes? ...

Mhm. The person below me had a bad day.

Introduction - yes. That's exactly what I had problems with, and which I edited a million million times. Hmm. Anyway, I did just now post a continuation. There I'm stopping, ...

- please? It's short. Impressions would be very, very welcome.

2/10 I'll take your word for it ^^ Don't know him. Should I? O.o (and points for emphasis on name xD)

KingKamor,   Hello. How’re you? Quote: Though it’s beyond my understanding, Xandra manages to sleep in through my alarm at 8:30 in the morning. Nice intro. Quote: With it being winter, ...

FreakForChrist is cool. *nods.

Sounds like something contemporary. Has anything to do with adoption? Hmm, yes, I think I'd go for that. Die, Die For Me.

Hmm, a shy, quiet girl who rarely speaks up. Feels uncomfortable in company. Perhaps she was grew up somewhere, and then had to move, or maybe her parents where from ...

Angel, thank you for reading. I know this is terribly short - I'd be irritated at that, too - but this is just a section that I'm having enormous trouble ...

Esteria, Hello! Welcome to YWS :) I hope you'll love it here. Anyway, I'm absolutely horrid at critiquing poetry, and know absolutely nothing about it, so I'll pass this review, ...

“Amalia Taestros.” “Eh?” The little boy squinted in the sunlight, scratching his chin. Then he turned his attention to the ground, and caught sight of a little rock a few ...

Alexis, Hello, welcome to YWS (: Hopefully you’ll love it here. Anyway, you got your fill of critiques and praise, but tiny little thing has to change. The zero I ...

“My name is Anaytharakhaiayain Smith, and I am The Chosen One.” or: “My name is Anaytharakhaiayain Smith, and I am The Chosen One, and so I will do great and ...