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Re: And there was drum roll chapter 1 part 1
Hey, Execution scene - lovely. Although it would depend on the point of view... Oh, and did you ever happen to read Sapkowki's "Witcher" series? There also was an execution ...
Apr 25, 2009 -
Re: Demon Street (0)
Hey, Ever read anything of Lilith Saintcrow's? She has a whole series about a woman - Danny Valentine - working (at least at first) for the devil. That series if ...
Apr 25, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [3]
8/10 Tink! Her expression says it all. I just don't like the sparks.
Apr 17, 2009 -
Re: Chill Days
Hey, One critique to blood you request, and so that you will get. quote: I'm a Star Wars-loving, Harry Potter-reading, robot-building, nerd. Get rid of last comma. quote: I know ...
Apr 17, 2009 -
Re: How to Become Unengaged
Hello :) How are you on this lovely evening? It's more of a night for me here, but no need to get too technical, no? About timing at least. Before ...
Apr 16, 2009 -
Re: A Simple Mistake: Chapter One (Edit)
Hello again, I'm back with the crit I promised :) Official greeting over, let's go. Hopefully I'll be a little more constructive this time. quote: My mind still played with ...
Apr 16, 2009 -
Re: A Simple Mistake: Prologue (edited)
Hey, I've made up my mind and decided to say something, even if it might seem a bit random - lockers are indeed evil, or, rather, locker keys are. Well-drawn-out ...
Apr 16, 2009 -
Re: That Summer On The Edge
Hello there, You'd be my very first critique-ish project in a very long time, and I'm on touchpad and just the slightest bit uncomfortable, so I'll start with the nitpicks, ...
Apr 16, 2009 -
Re: Die, Die For Me (I)
Thanks, thanks for the second review. ^^
Oct 3, 2008 -
Re: Planned Insanity
Angel, Ello. Here’s my crit (: Quote: My fingernails made painful indentations in my skin, as I tried hard to keep from reaching across the table. No comma. Quote: His ...
Oct 3, 2008 -
Re: New YWS Mock-Up (for real)
I think I like it. Will have to get used to it, though ^^
Oct 3, 2008 -
Re: Because - Chap. 3 (Edited)
KJ, Hello once again. Quote: He probably knew everything about me, as I did him. “as I did him”? Quote: Uncertain, I didn’t react, and after another second, ducked my ...
Oct 3, 2008 -
Re: Because - Chap. 2 (Edited)
KJ, Ello! How’re you on this lovely, lovely day? Hopefully well (: Anyway, my line-by-line critique is, for all purposes and intents, inexistent. Nothing. I guess I could ramble on ...
Oct 3, 2008 -
Re: Hello World!
Hello Meep no 2 ^^ Yeah, Singapore... Niiiice. Me wants to go there.
Oct 3, 2008 -
Re: The User Below You...
Yes! The person below me is the person above me. But after that it won't be me, 'cause we'll stop flooding the thread with out persons xD
Oct 3, 2008