Esmé

Thanks for taking your time and reading, I really appreciate it! I don't have the time write now, but in a few hours I'll probably come back and re-check my ...

Wow, there are already other comments. Sorry if I repeat (I was eating supper in the meantime, lol), but as I was writing I could not refreash my page and ...

Firstly, add question marks when they are needed =): a) The writing is more clear b) Simply because it is a courtesy to the reader Here we go: quote: "You ...

Eeeh, okay, I'm not goint to critic a critic, BUT -I actually liked the parts about the elves. They where interesting. Quote (Snoink): This part, like the grotty part, should ...

You said not to point out every little g. and s. mistake, but I’m afraid that at some points I have to. Use spell check if you have to. A ...

FOur books (woo hoo), 2 sweaters and 2 pairs of jeans (the ones that I wanted), a teddy bear LOL (it's cute), an angel, eeh pj's (great-grandmother here)and cash. Oh, ...

Uh, Izzy? Could you format and add spaces after full stops? When you do that, I'll come back and write a critic for you. If I accidentally foreget, PM me ...

Firstly, I wanted to say that I really liked the story - is there going to be a continuation? =) They way that you showed Gertrude’s thoughts was both interesting ...

Granted, but they turn out to be... uh... rubbish I wish I finally started studying physics...

The first thing that I noticed when I started to read your story is the lack of apostrophes. Generally, it makes a better impression if your spelling and grammar is ...

I went through like 8 schools now (talk about moving) which where in different countries, e.g. america, spain, south africa, and I'm surpirsed to say that most lack stores. I ...

8/10 - amazing view and very nice collors!

If you like taking pics of graves, then keep on doing that. -I mean, the're only pictures, right? I you like it, then I don;t see why you should stop. ...

To tell the truth, I had some problems at first, too. -But at some point I got insterested, lol.

-And the title. It means that Ella was faithful to Gordon? oops, it took me e few second to figure that out =) Nice story!