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I personally like teh one with the ladybug the most. -That doesn;t mean that I don;t like the rest! They're all great! The last one is kind of blurry, though.

I understand that this is after a correction? :) I would not like to just copy what Poor Imp said, lol. I'll be writing the comment as I read, but ...

It is a bit hard to give a comment on such a short piece of writing :) I liked the idea, but I think that you wrote this piece in ...

Okay, I see that everything has been said, lol. I just wanted to add that the description of the dragon was fabulous.

I saw that you didn't have any comments, so I though I would drop in and give you one :) Quote: years ago, I lived in that horrid place. It ...

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Phorcys said it all. I have nothing to add,w ith the exception that I had o make myself read it. Note: I am not saying that your writing is rubbish, ...

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Thank you Lilly and Phorcys for taking your time and writing a critique! As to the first paragraph, I know it is a bit... well, uhm... weird... I'm curently taking ...

Quote: "Innocnce is nonsense these days. That's what grandfather used to always say. Sometimes on days like these i agree." from the diary of Tairen Zyiak January 12th, 1352. Not ...

Thank you very much for taking your time and reading this, I really do appreciate it. :)

Tamora Pierce :) She's great AND wrote loads of books, lol.

You know what? I agree with Griffinkeeper and Phorcys. However, I wouldn’t be myself if I didn’t point out some minor mistakes… Quote: But one of his subordinates, Lieutenant Richards, ...

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Generally, I agree with the two above comment, lol J Quote: I had never been good about standing in front of a crowd, and even though there were only seven ...