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I read 'His Dark Materials' a long time ago, and I barely remember the character. -As I read all the comments, though, a spark of memmory came back. lol Mrs. ...

I'm currently reading a lecture (eh, is that the right word for a book that your teacher told you two read?) Anyways, its called "Kamienie na szaniec" Aleksander Kaminski - ...

Deleted due to my horrid translation from Polish to English. :)

Personally I think that killing anothe rliving person is horrible. Hanging, the electric chair... I mean, we are killing a person who killed someone else! I understand that something should ...

Better? hangs head* - I liked the names, lol.

Hi! I was browsing the forums and saw that you have no comment, so I though I would wright you a critique. (I can't give you much feedback on pokemon, ...

Influences? I really don't know. I started writing at about the age of eight (though obviously what I wrote was mostly rubbish). Probably boredom. If I'm bored and I have ...

Yeah, I basically agree with everyone before me (though I see you've formatted - good). In the first paragraph, you have too many '...' The first one is ok, but ...

I think cadminium caught it all :) I have one comment though: try making more paragraphs (they are too long. Reread them and you will see that the beginning usually ...

Quote: Simon got home he noticed something was wrong. ‘When Simon (…)’ Quote: He went inside and grabbed the cordless phone stuck it in his pocket and headed off towards ...

I think it had a flow, but I can't say that I liked it. Why did you capitalize every single word? I also couldn't get any meaning out of that.

I wish I could draw like that...

QUote: It seemed that time slowed as the stumbled across Rockefeller Center, slow enough to grasp every horrific image and digest it until her pale cheeks were stained with tear. ...

Quote: Breathing shallowly, Alex made as little noise as possible, and tried not to look down at rushing river far below. I'm not sure, but I think the sentence is ...

I agree with everyone who posted before me. I think that you should actually reread what you wrote before posting it... -The idea was okay, I guess...