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Re: Title Feedback
Contemporary. For teens. Deffinitely now fantasy, or sci-fi, perhaps a romance of some kind with a highschool setting. I don't think I'd take another look at it basing on the ...
May 7, 2009 -
Re: Metamorphosis
Quote: It was only ironic that the cold wet droplets would make my happiness morph into sorrow. I dislike that “irony” comment. I mean, it’s such a – common thing ...
May 6, 2009 -
Re: Accidental Exposure
Kara, Hello again, me once more. Quote: I stood in the pool, completely and utterly stunned at the stunt Layla had just pulled. Word play. “Stunned” – “stunt” = no. ...
May 1, 2009 -
Re: Disabilities
Kara, Firstly, hello and welcome to YWS! To warn you, it’s a terrifyingly addictive site, so beware. The story itself, though - It was the summary that drew me in. ...
Apr 29, 2009 -
Re: untitled
Daniella, Hello and welcome to YWS! This is a terrific, horridly addicting site that if all goes well you will soon find it hard to be away from. Before I ...
Apr 28, 2009 -
Re: The Dark Abyss (Preface & Chapter 1)
Hello, Joining date gives you away, ha! Welcome to YWS ^^ Hopefully you’ll find your own snuggly spot here and stay with us forever and always. Before I comment on ...
Apr 28, 2009 -
Re: Shadows [1]
Doodle, Honored for being the first :wink: Thanks for reading, I'll most deffinitely take your suggestions into consideration. Thanks once more, Esme
Apr 28, 2009 -
Re: Shadows [1]
Dudette, Thank you for your wonderful critique of my story. I really appreciate your time! And yes, I’ll be rephrasing some of those. Thanks again, Esme Syte, Seems you posted ...
Apr 27, 2009 -
Re: Once Upon a Morning
Hello sparkle, Welcome to YWS, the best site evah. Hopefully you’ll like it here and find a nice snuggly spot for yourself. Mmm, but before I say anything about your ...
Apr 27, 2009 -
Re: Shadows [1]
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Apr 27, 2009 -
Re: Are you afraid of the mods?
Yes! - flees -
Apr 27, 2009 -
Re: Desmond Carter
Hello there, Pff. Remember the contest name if you’re going to mention it! *** Quote: This knack, after too many examples to count, became a religion in Carters mind. Apostrophe ...
Apr 26, 2009 -
Re: Ælëd
Hello, I don't know how to read her name. Neither the clan name, or - I don't know. I just don't. It looks pretty, yes, but there's a blank spot ...
Apr 26, 2009 -
Re: Life After Death part 1
Hey there, Vampires are uber cool, no matter what Meyers did to them, no matter than when these days you say "vampire", the automatic response is - "Edward?!" That's silly. ...
Apr 26, 2009 -
Re: Saddest Book
"My Sister's Keeper," Jodi Picoult. I cried.
Apr 25, 2009
