Esmé

The fly flew into the coffin. -Wow, lol. Sorry for posting again so quickly.

Yea, I agree with lampshade on the whole. This isnt my type of story, but I thought I'd read it - a good choice, lol. One comment though: You will ...

Okay, I'll be writing a critique as I read. ere it goes: quote: For all my life we had lived next to the strangest house that ever was. 'That ever ...

I saw that you have 0 comment and though I could give you a critique :) quote: He opened one eye and peaked at the clock 12:00 was flashing on ...

Uhum, I agree with every positive opinion before me, lol.

Before actually reading, I want to ask one question: Why didn't you format? And why do you not have spaces after commas? It's a bit hard to read when it's ...

haunted house

18th Watershone, 38th year of the Phoenix Time present -Cheers!- called Lenori from the end of the breathtakingly food-laden table. Lillith, uneasily sitting on the other table awkwardly returned the ...

I’m going to quote your mistakes as I read, sorry if I miss anything Quote: Tesla : did you realize it’s been seven year’s sense the war ended? ‘Did’ with ...

It seems that all the mistaked have been caught - I really have nothing to add, lol. I enjoyed reading this; it was an interesting piece of writing. I didn't ...

JBJETT sounds sooo cool, lol. I agree with Shafter: This is a very weird poll

cloudy skies - the harboring of disaster

Gross speed: 53 WPM Errors: 1 word Net speed: 52 WPM Accuracy: 98% I agree with Snoink: E.g. I typoe way faster if I know what I want to type ...

Granted. Now your other foot is starting to feel dead/asleep! I wish were the holidays again :)

I think that this is supposed to be in the fiction section, not in writing activities!