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Thanks Sureal! I corrected all the spelling and grammar mistakes, thanks for pointing them out. As to the first sentence... -You have no idea how much I modified it... I ...

I’m a bit tired, so sorry if I omit any mistakes. I’ll be making corrections as I read, here it goes: Quote: Uhm… I can’t find anything to correct. Wow. ...

8th of Airflamed 23rd year of the Phoenix Diaries recovered from Naesaen Fires I think that now it would be best if I described my childhood. Before Aereinod’s death and ...

Okay, okay, I get your point. But proper spelling and grammar make the read easier and more enjoyable. If your writing something, put some effort into it, try to make ...

I am a bit tired - sorry if I miss some mistakes and if some of my comments seem a bit brutal. In your first paragraph, you have wolf too ...

Quote: Once there was a queen, her kingdom was falling. Her mind, going. Her friends and allies gone. All she had left was her ambition. That was all that could ...

I personally enjoyed reading HP, but reading it once was enough of me, This wasn;t teh type of book that you can go back to even if you know what ...

I agree with Firesarter here - it was very interesting. You have a nice way of presenting facts. As to Animorphs - I think i read some of the books ...

Yeah, I agree on the present time issue. After that, I have nothing to say, with th eexception that I liked your writing. Follow angels suggestions, ad it will be ...

I love LOTR - I think the trilogy is great, lol. Read it in two laguages, hehe. But if you don't like the book, I don;t see the point of ...

All I know is that the book was great, one of my faves. I read it a long time ago and would love to read it again... However i can't ...

kaolin, get a life... As to the script, I really enjoyed it... I have an irresistable urge to go wash my hair* LOL It was funny and had humor - ...

Are you writing this just to get points? Huh... Get a life, kaolin. Please. As to the script, I think its good (sry for the bare term, but I'm not ...

ELEIN lol. Since it's already here, I'll make a critique. a) Format (how I hate that word.)= spaces between paragraphs. Quote: Watching all the little lambs from below, he wondered, ...

I personally do not think eragon was that good (no offence :)) I just din't like it that much. I read boh parts, though. As to your writing... My poetry ...