Esmé

You a poet, Duskglimmer? Nicely said. I can't say much about God. My dad is an atheist, mom didn't attend mass since her wedding, lol. Last time I was at ...

'She won't come back. She's gone."

He HAS to die. Really. Truly. Just like HP. If he doesn;t, you'll always feel the temptation to come back to him. -But how? Difficult question. Mellodramatics are often a ...

I agree with Shafter here: cover art is a big booster. I have the habit of picking books ONLY with good cover art. (Which I know is bad, there are ...

What do I rely on..? Hm... I think that on the mind. If I relied on my heart, I would... hm... Lets just say that I'm a born egoist, i ...

That is me. Geez, I have problem.

(I have a qustion to rosethorn: can Isadell and avril no each other and be on 'good' terms? I mean not friends, but neutral?)

Isadell de Shalae straightened, examining herself in the mirror. Her reflection showed a tall, slender woman in her mid-twenties. Underneath a storm of tar black curls shone with a light ...

Name: Isadell de Shalae (Often called Lady of the Red Citadel) Gender: Female Hair: Tar black, with a lock of red Eyes: Also tar black Body Type: Slim, tall. Beautiful, ...

Okay, this comment was stupid. I mean, your title says: continuation, doesn;t it? Sheesh...

Oh, so Star dies? A pitty... Anyways, you're lucky your english teacher checks your work! Mine wouldn;t understand a fraction of what I wrote (poland here, lol).

8th of Airflamed 23rd year of the Phoenix Diaries recovered from Naesaen Fires I think that now it would be best if I described my childhood. Before Aereinod’s death and ...

Granted. Winter becomes hot. I mean, really hot. As hot as the sun, to tell you the truth. You are starting to melt... I wish I wrote at least one ...

Yeah, I agree with Phorcys. This is way too short to write a critique. quote: Angrily, she sent him to box shipment, the worst job there, where he packed boxes ...

Thank you soooo much for taking your time and doing critique. I really appreciate it. And yes, I am thirteen. This was written when i was twelve, though :) Thanks ...