Eslyssa

And you say you're not a good poet! I loved this. A really nice change, as Areida said. Perhaps it needs a little polishing, but then, what poem doesn't? If ...

Wow, this is really amazing. I'm impressed. I agree, though that you might be a bit repetitive with the vocabulary you used. That said, I quite like the simplicity of ...

I really like this. As Duskglimmer said, I think this is a great framework. Are you planning to expand/polish this? It's really... powerful. I think it needs something at the ...