Eris

Hi, Caged! Welcome to Young Writers Society! =) I do like it, but there are a few things that need to be fixed. When you love , can ' t ...

Hi Jayden, and welcome to Young Writers Society! =) I really like this poem, but the last two lines don't seem to match completely when it comes to syllables. I ...

Hello, Ginger! This is a very interesting story, and I like it. =) Like Caitlyn said, I only really notice typos, punctuation, and capitalization errors. Pandora ran fast down the ...

Hi Sudz! This is an interesting piece and I do look forward to reading more of your writing, but I do think there's room for improvement. “Sandy!!!!! I did it! ...