Eric511

Wow. The story is very detailed. You really know how to paint a picture in your head. Great detail, but maybe a tad too much in some areas. But you ...

Well in one of my stories, I have had some writer's block. I need help thinking of a crime my main character can commit. The story takes place in medieval ...

Wow your character sounds very interesting. You made it very easy to picture her with the good descriptions. I can easily imagine her physically and her personality. Very complex. Her ...

I like the Gaia story and the Lost sorceress. They sound interesting.

Sorry it's kinda long, didn't really think when I submitted it

Interesting, makes you want to know what happens after. Some of the details like the cowboy thing and the texan accent, seemed in the wrong time and age. Perhaps you ...

That was pretty interesting. I do agree with Joec that you should spell check it. The other thing that I would say needs help is detail. You should explain the ...

Well hello. This is ch1 of one of my stories. I'm pretty sure there is alot of stuff i need to improve on in my writing, so I'd like to ...

Hey wassup people. My names Eric. Ya I'm new and stuff. I have been looking for a site like this for awhile. Finally I found this one hurray. Since I'm ...