Eric511

im sorry if the paragraphs arent indented correctly, they were originally, but wen i posted it, it didnt seem to space right. im happy with my prologue. Im mainly concerned ...

In my current story, there is alot of swear words in it from a few characters. i have never really done a story that swear words are used so much ...

hey people dont read this one, i made some adjustments and stuff read this one

Warming my heart My heart is a strange thing sometimes. One day I will see a friend and the next as someone so beautiful that I want to be with ...

Also i haven't quite finished this, but in this i want to create a cold, bitter and naggy sort of feeling at the beginning, but at the end to be ...

This is not the final draft. There is a bunch of things i need to fix and add description. Feel free to point out what I should fix, but the ...

lol thanks people. From some of your reactions, I can tell I hit the spot. That makes me happy. I'm still workin on it so...I will correct the stuff and ...

lol i like ur enthusiasm. thnks for reading it

Alright thanks soo much you guys make it so much easier to edit this. Thanks again. : )

Thanks people. I will take all your advice into consideration as i make this story better.Thanks for reading it

Hey guys. I did some fixing on my story One Night, but I feel like something is missing. I added a bit more feeling towards the main character and added ...

Alright Thanks for giving me some help. thank you so much for all your guy's advice. I'll fix it up a bit and repost it in awhile. After rereading it ...

One night It was a Saturday night when it happened. It was supposed to be such a great night. It was our five year anniversary. I could not believe he ...

Hey I think i have an idea. My Main character in the confusion of a battle, accidentally killed the king's son while he was fighting, but others swear he did ...

I am just at a complete block right now and can't think of anything. I would just skip this part and start writing others in my story, but this is ...