Eric

Extremely well done. The people above seem to have pointed out all your little mistakes, so I won't tell you what you already know. I will, however, say that the ...

Hey, I haven't talked to you in a minute. :wink: Lol Hopefully I will be on her more often. Really busy as of late. :roll: That really was a good ...

Hey there! I really enjoyed reading this. It was pretty cool, and I thought I'd go ahead and break down my crit line-by-line. It may not be the best though; ...