Epidemic

Thanks for the input (on both this and the prologue). I'll work on the suggestions for fine-tuning as I have time. Both this and the prologue are still in early ...

Thanks for the input. I did enjoy writing the prologue because it is essentially the backdrop to the story. I've been re-reading it to see if I could move stuff ...

*Edit* Some parts of the old prologue have been moved here, and I've added paragraph breaks to make it "more readable," although I'm really not too happy that it had ...

*Edit* I've adjusted this as much as possible without elimininating what is in my opinion vital information. Some chunks have been moved and will be seen in the first chapter, ...

I really like the way this poem is written. You can really tell that the emotion is there. I'm not usually one for long lines in poems, but in my ...

I really like this poem, and I just have a few wee things to say! Firstly; It’s cold outside , a frigid night. I can be a bit of a ...

When I read through this, the lyrics of Evanescence's songs, "Am I too lost to be saved?" "Return to me salvation" jumped out right away, because "Tourniquet" is a fairly ...

Sun, Sun, Oh golden Sun! You watch us all day, And hear what we say. Nothing to say about this line, I like it. Sun, Sun, Oh golden Sun! We ...

*Edit* I updated this to take out the short repeated stanza, and incorperated some of it into a new full stanza. Here is a poem I wrote several years ago, ...

Well, I never claimed that all 25 of the pieces I've written are good. In fact, some of the ones I've written I re-read and absolutely detest the way they ...

I really enjoyed reading this, and loved the content of the poem. There are only two things that just seem to jump out as stange: To your True Love’s kiss. ...

This is a piece I wrote near the beginning of the year. When I write my poetry, most of it has a couple things in common: 1. A stanza that ...

When I read this through the first time, I did't have any initial interpretations, but after reading it a second time, I got the impression of a graveyard. I don't ...

I'm new to this site and just thought I'd give an introduction. I came accross YWS as a result of a google search, and thought it would be nice to ...