EpicHumiliation

Awesome man! Glad you liked it. I've decided to take on a new turn anyway. I still might write some soft type kinds of songs, but mostly heavy metal. I ...

Thanks for that constructive criticism and your thoughts on the poem. I also used what you said and I've redone the poem over. Thanks again :)

Hmm.. hehe I don't get it either but I really just enjoyed anyway for some reason. :P Those little rhyming things are fun to me. And, I really don't have ...

The midnight. It engulfs the very light that shone upon it long ago, goes inside the makers of the foundations of this world. Corroding their minds of the mercy that ...

I agree with AlyssaKyle. It's like a huge giant cliff hanger and leaves a lot of open questions. But, I do like your wording. I'm weird probably just like a ...

If you think you're worthless. If you think you don't belong. If you think of suicide, well honey, You're thinking wrong. Life is measured by how you live. Life is ...

hmm... I don't know what it is about this piece... but I like it. And how the hand looks like it just got done drawing the tree (in my point ...

Hmm... I agree with Cassie with the how fast the story seemed to transition around so fast. I found myself always wondering what was going on, but on the whole. ...

Hmm... well, when I was reading this, for someone reason I had a flash back to the band Disturbed. -shrugs- but anywho, I liked the ending of this and I ...

Thanks for the constructive criticism. I corrected it, thanks again for bringing that to my attention.

Wow, I was expecting something not that great actually. Thanks for making my assumption totally and embarrassingly wrong! Awesome, I really like songs like this. Agression and aditude.... always great

Hmm.. interesting. To be honesty, I've never read over a song that this kind of style. It's not that I don't like it though. Don't get that assumption, I think ...

Hmm.. thanks, I think I will actually use that title. Yeah, I have a different style with songs sometimes. I sing it while I'm typing/writing it down. =) Thanks again!

I know things are hard now I know things are hard to take in I know your heart is sinking in I know your mind is think- ing What am ...

Oh, my word. That was amazingly well written. And, I can't even describe how intrigued I was with each new sentence and.. I mean.... I'm a little speechless after reading ...