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  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: CandyLand

    Hi, excellent story! I loved how you used lots of imagery and dialogue to accurately depict what is happening in each scene. From a reader's perspective I would add more ...

    Jun 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Film Re: An introduction of CID.

    Your intro sounds good; but you could make this change. Refrain from using too many simple sentences: eg: John went to the zoo. He bought icecream there. There were two ...

    Jun 18, 2015


Oh, Brightlord Tumul! How unexpected it is to see you standing there! I didn't mean to insult your stupidity. Really, it's quite spectacular and worthy of much praise.
— Wit (The Way of Kings by Brandon Sanderson)