Enigmatic_Penguin

Thanks Elel, I believe you do have a point with the race making. Mmm... all kind of challenging =P Maybe I'll use Dwarves and Elves, but like you said, look ...

Dwarves living in mountains and being good miners. I mean, it seems fitting with their general appearance. If that is alright, what are something things I shouldn't do with my ...

Strange is always good. My character's animal partner is a squirrel that can shape-shift into a race I half made up (He shifts into a Salamander, or fire Elemental. They ...

I am planning a fantasy story, and I would like to know if some of the following items would be consider... "deadly" cliches, if you will. Dwarves living in mountains ...

Thanks everybody. I think mapping it out would help.

I came up with a good storyline, but now I can't seem to right it out in story form. I always get side-tracked and don't know what to do next! ...

Or you can look at Alaska. Lots of pine and game and fish there... not many people. It's too cold. :P A question! Do your people wear clothes? What doesn't ...

Interesting question. But a few things... is Taiga the name of the second village or do you mean something else? And what do you mean by trade center? Oh, sorry; ...

In my story, I will have a village in the north. It is next to taiga full with great timber and a fishful sea, yet I would like to keep ...

No problem. If you decide to stick with this story, I'd be really interested in seeing your first chapter/prologue.

Easier to read than the last one, but I meant having actual spacing between every few sentences :) Anyway, the plot seems interesting enough; I'll keep track of your updates. ...

And remember, if you are going to mess with history, look up the real version first. Do not use soviet-stereotypes to project how they would act in your situations; look ...

Sounds interesting, but I think that saying they were after the girl because "she was rich" doesn't seem to cut it IMO. Maybe they got rich because he is the ...

Alright, you got me there. Anyway, I would recommend that next time you post a long, story related chapter/synopsis/etc., that you don't bunch everything up. Nothing deters people from reading ...

Er, I know this isn't exactly the type of criticism you are searching for, but I must tell you that the story might not be appealing to males. But, I'm ...