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Re: Anzac Warriors
This is a war-themed story rated 16+ for violence and blood for the first world war. Enjoy! :mrgreen: Oh and yes I am aware the thoughts are in italics too ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: The Tyrannical World
Hello I'm SweetMoments and I'm here to review! It might just be me but seemed more a story than a poem. But, being a poem you should still capitalize your ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Post your gif HERE!
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May 5, 2011 -
Re: A Phantom or Memory? (poem written by friend died recently)
Nothing really wrong with this poem, actually, I really liked it! I like the kind of repetitive question throughout it and the sort of imagery you get with not many ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: 100 Wishes.
Hello I don't think this needs a review so I shall comment :) I'm SweetMoments and I am here to comment. I think the goals were interesting and it would ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Drive-Thru Review
Cool sounds good :) Once I work on and get some more chapters of my novel up I'll come your way
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Violet Saga: Prologue Rewrite: Rough Draft 2 Complete
Hi I'm SweetMoments and I'm here to review! I really like this idea: kinda red-queen like right? I like how you describe but I think you could flesh it out ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: A Ghost In This World
Hi I'm SweetMoments and I'll be your reviewer for today. Wow, simply wow. This is amazing! The emotion is perfect and it really made me tear up as I read ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Rejection
Hey I'm SweetMoments and I'll be your reviewer today! I really loved the imagery in this piece and the raw emotion as well! I know exactly how you feel and ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: The Missing Link Prologue and Chapter one
Hi, I'm SweetMoments and I'll be your reviewer today ! Although the idea of this is a little cliched I think you brought it off well with your characters being ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Poetry Contest
Hello, this is SweetMoments here to review on review day! This is pretty cool! I like how you effortly rhyme without making it sound forced, which is very hard to ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Stroll (With a Stranger)
Hello, I'm SweetMoments! Like Lav said I like how you repeat the words: blithe, blithe pale, pale etc Its certainly is unique but it might just be my blunt mind, ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Winterland.
This had heaps of imagery and made you picture everything. My favourite bit was probably the second paragrapth as the first one had just a litte too much imagery there ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: It Wasn't Supposed to End This Way (Chapter Eight)
Hello, it’s been a while since I've reviewed your novel and today is review day soooo yeah! First of all I really liked the imagery in this piece that makes ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: My first release
Oh cool! Congrats, what is it about? What company published it?
May 1, 2011