Eniarrol

This poem truly is a peice of art, I could hear and see exactly what the dog could. To be honest (and a bit pathetic) I almost cried. I can't ...

I love how the poem goes in full circle to the end and repeats the first stanza very beautiful. And I know you’re watching me too And I know you ...

I've been getting round to making a character can someone tell me what has happened so far?

Vice. One a day became three, she was upset at me, she hated me. Take out at me it crowds the sentance But all of us have our vice and, ...

I think i'm getting the hang at this poetry thing now :? Ever wish you could start again, Flick a switch, Forget the pain, Sail across this sea of life, ...

First of all I love this poem! Good work. Until then I’d just like for you to know It isn’t your touch, but the seeds that you sow. Love this ...

Like shiney said this is a very commonly used theme but i loved the way you worded your poem and the way that you used your layout, it i made ...

I like this poem but I find how the ending line for each stanza is similar destracts it from the actual part of the poem although that is my opinian ...

Great job I love this poem! Good to now that I am not one of the only people who notice this happening to our world. Keep writing!

The picture are all breathtaing but one nit pick, the last photo of the bridge maybe it would be better if there was no people there as it takes the ...

Its a cute story although maybe, a bit much like Twilight. Other than that its good. Keep writing!

Nice one! Would love to hear more :)

I love this poem it is very true :)

Great Job! The only nit pick I can find is how you start to rhyme halfway through. Maybe change it so it is all rhyming or all not, other than ...

I understand the bit about the last two stanza's is not that good I shall work on it. RememberMe its supposed to be about a child who always feels like ...