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Re: my bestfriend
Im sad for my friend, he and I are very close he keeps hearing voice's in his head saying how dissapointing,what a bum and failure he's turned out to be ...
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: Boulevard of Broken Dreams
Boulevard of Broken Dreams I wander through the dark, Dreams searing through my mind. This eternal hell of nightmares, What humans dread and fear. I can never escape this devil’s ...
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: Fallen
I lay in wait for I know my fate when I return to the skies they will surely see through my lies my wings will be teared from me with ...
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: Lost
Lost Walking down a road, People watching me. Wishing for my abode, Needing to think clearly. How did I get here? My mother once said, “You’ll find your place my ...
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: The Job of the Writer
When you write it’s hard to realize; The reader’s not inside your head. They don’t know what you know. All they have is what they’ve read. Love this stanza Their ...
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: Photography (Long due.) + YWLJ submissions
I agree with meep the first one has a really cool meaning to it and I also liked the picture of the rose don't know why but I love pictures ...
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: One Thousand Parts
T he feeling of death darkly. F eet knocking floor. O ne two , one two pause and swig. H eart hidden deep. He stumbles in, bronze Liquor, rotting tongue/mind. ...
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: A Lion Without His Roar.
Everyone else has said basicly everything so all I would like to say is I enjoyed this poem quite well done!
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: ...
T he chimes are ladders of glass, Like this bit music climbing their rungs as remove as the sparrow flicks her wings at them in flight, hovering breathless in the ...
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: New Member in the house!
Welocome i'm sure you'll have lots of fun at YWS so far I have :) I hope you post some of your work soon. So again WELCOME!!!!!
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: Roses of Winter
Like the others have said their both amazing but if I had to choose,I would pick the second one its amazing how the colours contrast with the white of the ...
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: To all my best friends on YWS.
Awesome one, Cool way to use a poem :) :shock: where is SweetMoments
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: new here!
I agree with lily I tend to reveiw more short stories and poems than big long peices as I get bored so yeah welcome! I'm SweetMoments I hope you post ...
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: Pennies and Drains
I love this poem it gets your point across really well and I love how at the ending you explain how there not poor anymore ect very good I have ...
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: The Kill
I love these lyrics I can imagine what it might sound like with music and voice well done!
Dec 3, 2010