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"Hush, Hush, come join us." Their voices snake around me Those behind shielded eyes, heads turned away, Shuddering, trying to ignore the light. This has an amazing imagery to it ...

This is very short and sweet, quite a cute poem I have no corrections to make. I hope you keep writing poems as there is something there that you could ...

Define cute. I was meaning the idea in particular I don't think that grammer really matters you can learn punctuation but true inspiration for writing a good story comes from ...

That's really cool but I think the eyes and lips could be more defined or is that just me? I really love this picture pretty cool

I think you could list them better ect number one, number two and maybe more descriptive with the other reasons although I love the last bit it's really cute about ...

I was thinking of creating one where all the entries are diary entries,poems or short stories the character has created about their life to tell a story about what is ...

I like this style of writing poetry with the questions but I don't quite get what your writing about and it doesn't seem quite finished but that might be just ...

Hi! Real nice poem but the only thing I have a nit pick about is how many ... you use ( sorry can't think of the word for them) using ...

I'm a flickering light, Now an unknown shadow, No one around to hear my sorrow Fragile as glass, About to break, No one there to see my face In darkened ...

A sweet, pitiful face is what they all see, But I know the truth. I don't think you need but Because behind that mask, I don't think you need because ...

Hi i'm here to reveiw your work it was very nice. I remeber your fumble, the trip, the fall. I remember the laughter, the pointed fingers. I remember it all. ...

I like this poem although slightly short but I think it works for this piece. If this stranger remembers me, he should know my hand is lonely tired of endless ...

I like this poem it flowed quite nicely and I could tell it was very heartfelt Well done!

I like the way it flows and how well it is written but I couldn't quite tell what was going on in this poem could you tell me? Eyes open ...

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