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I'm not saying you haven't been through it i'm just saying that it is a very used topic and you presented it in a different and good way :)

Is this just me or have you not said how Lily has found out that James likes her it just seems to jump into her knowing that he likes her ...

Heya Niccie Christmas Is here, All the lights, all the bells. Sales in shops, and toys all around. Gifts under the tree, The angel ontop. Nativity scenes, And the bonbons ...

Could you please reveiw my poem Thanks :) Its a bit rushed though...

I really like this poem exsept for one nitpick And drops softly down on the table, Softly doesn't seem quite right as usually you don't say that liquid drops softly ...

This is such a nice idea although I think you could make the diary entries longer and more detailed as the events seem to be missing some depth to them ...

This is an environmental poem the 'she' in the poem is Mother Nature displaying how we are killing the earth for our own greed. She watches above us Cries tears ...

Faith I couldn't sleep, every time I closed my eyes the cold black stare of the big bad made me wake up shivering the night air seeming so much colder ...

Faith I hung back behind the other red hoods, the huge yellow fangs bared up at me threatening to rip open my flesh. My small whimper suddenly turned into a ...

Faith Is this okay? I sat lightly in the pine tree its branches creating a comfortable seat for me. Through the tree I could see the sky, no stars peeped ...

This was brillient please post the next chapter :)

Thats a real lovely poem exsept I think you should make the ending stronger compared with the rest of the poem like Nature lives in harmony, Humans live in war ...

Rayne she means side as in the mashed potatoes on the side as in not important not in the middle of her circle.

I am SweetMoments and I am going to reveiw your work. Let me take your hands Nice opening line And free you from all demands Let me take your lips ...

I really enjoyed this poem but it seems to be lacking feeling like you were watching a movie without sound if you know what i'm saying its there but its ...