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  • Other » General, General Re: Removed at Authors Request

    I have made some amendments which you may prefer for the context of a short story - Thanks again.

    Dec 30, 2014
  • Other » General, General Re: Removed at Authors Request

    Thanks Shadowman, I appreciate the feedback. I agree with your comment. The amount of descriptive language can be over-bearing in this piece and this is something I will be looking ...

    Dec 29, 2014


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