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Darn you, Trident, we tied in our number of correct answers, however, you beat me in time by ONE second. :) Ha.

Tell ya what, I'm not too proud to admit a mistake. I'll give you the benefit of the doubt, maybe I should have posted the positive things; however, there are ...

Until now, I have yet to type the word naive. I apologize for critiquing it. I'm not trying to start a bash war here, so I'm hoping (assuming) that we ...

Maybe it's just because fantasy fiction isn't my cup of tea, but I didn't really get into this. It was mildly enjoyable, but that's stretching it a tad for me. ...

Well, the fact that it hasn't been up 24 hours could have something to do with the lack of critiques. ;) Thanks for the comments guys.

Unlike Lilyy and Squallz, I actually enjoyed the history lesson at the beginning. I'm also fascinated with history, so that might be why; however, I feel like this did serve ...

From the time the birds sang their first gleeful note, it became evident that this day would be out of the ordinary. There was something about how the shadows of ...

I, apparently, have more general knowledge than I was aware of: scored 9 out of 10. Not too shabby. :) Great idea.

For what is there I really don't think I can add too much to what the person above me did. However, I'd just like to say that I totally agree ...

I'll definitely take that into consideratoin; however, I was aiming for the complexity of the words. The diction is this poem was aimed to make the reader think - it's ...

Mystification Existing in a universe of obscurity, a nonexistent plane of impurity, fleeing from repugnance of transgressions passed, carelessly reaching towards things unsurpassed. Devoured by a stat

I'd say, for starters, you REALLY need to get a flowing structure. If this were a free verse poem it'd be fine; however, in a song that will be performed ...

I'd say the best suggestion is to sit down with a guitar and/or piano and try to work this out. As they've already said above me, I think that some ...

Well, this is mainly a glorified rant session for me seeing as my teacher allowed us to choose from topics. The best thing is our teacher went easy on us, ...

I find myself on the side of the fence with Cladette. I prefer proper grammar; however, I'm not too sure as to why that is how it is with me. ...