Enchanted

Prologue: Olivia How many moments in your life can you say, "This is where it all changed" for me, it's three. The moment I met him, the moment I fell ...

I really like when people refer to snow, theres something so inspiring about it! and I love how you take something so simple and make it so complex and beautiful. ...

I think the concept it great, you could go ever deeper if you wanted I think! you have a great way of providing imagery. it's really amazing.

I really liked the two alternating points of view, each so different. I liked knowing what was going on in both characters heads! tats a really clever way to write. ...

the quote was beyonddddd powerful to me! I loved how you chose to write on it. I thought it was a really greta piece of writing :)

I really enjoyed this! mainly because I could really relate to it. the feelings your character expressed are very similar to those of mine and and someone in my life! ...

Thank you so much! your suggestions have helped me when going over it :) I appreciate it. to clear up confusion, in the beginning she is obviously being broken up ...

any input is very appreciated !! :) It was the most wonderfully heartbreaking thing. He held my hand. I took it gracefully, politely, but most of all, insincerely. I was ...

His hand brushed against mine. Electrifying. A bolt of lust rushed through my viens, and I found myself staring into his deep brown eyes. This was pathetic. Me. Him. It ...

I've highlighted my personal opinions and corrections in blue :) This is basically the beginning of something that I hope will turn out quite lovely. Sorry about the awkward ending. ...

I LOVE this. It's so relatable ! the concept is great. but in end, I'm still left with so many questions! I would love if the piece was longer, and ...

These are the first two chapters of the story I am writing :) it is told from alternating views, Stephen and Olivia. I would REALLLLLLLYYY honestly appreciate ANY input even ...