Emotastic_Writer

These suicidal twists in life With all the tears, the screams, the knife Is life only about how long you live? How much you give? Where is the caring and ...

You should mix it up, make it jazz and flow better. The word now is used too much and makes it wayy to repetitive. Maybe try to use a different ...

^_^ I think it's good. I like how you used the word naked and not blank or something.

I think it's great. Some may say it needs editing but i like it the way it is. Only maybe you should change a few words, the flow is a ...

I'm not the heavy metal type but my friend is in a heavy metal band. I am getting to like it. I think that the change from calm to roar ...

'She goes all over the ice twirling and jumping. She feels like she’s flying, Flying away from everything.' That is a good part, it has a good description and it ...

The beginning paragraph is good. It helps me visualize something going awfully wrong. The second paragraph is good, it shows desperation and confusion. It shows in reality what many people ...

Okay wow lots of questions. My writing isn't really one specific style i just freewrite and it goes from there. 1)What is your favourite color? It's Purple 2)What is your ...

I used to play the piano and i think this is amazing. It has great description and imagery. I can imagine trailing my hands along the keys and playing. You ...

I think that the way you word it is a bit confusing and it threw me off but the basic gist is good. You were slow at first but towards ...

Chapter One: A Meeting With A Vampire, Life Mate Midori trailed her hand along the wall, her skin crawling because it was damp and slimy, “ew, this is so gross.” ...

Oh thnak you so muhc, i'll keep the rules in mind. And my authors chnage cause i read tons, right now it's Ellen Schreiber and i watch way too many ...

Uhm so i am new, i mostly write poems but i am a little confused as to how this site works. Someone want to give me a few tips? Please? ...