EmmaeArkay

Nice finale, liked it as always. :D Isn't really that much I can complain about aside from my usual pedantic comments. E.g: each clash an explosion happened 'Happened' is a ...

First of all, thanks for all the replies. :) I made a fanfic short story and the response was a little sluggish so I'm surprised how many people reviewed this ...

A tramp sat at a cold, windy street corner and mumbled swear words at the cigarette in his hand that refused to light, his frail, near blue arms shaking in ...

Nice. :D Well, eventually. I've always hated poetry, but that's just because it never fails to make me feel stupid, until I looked at the spoiler thing in your message ...

*Remembers to follow* There, now it should remind me when new parts come out... I think. :| Okay, I'll get the critical stuff out the way. At a bend in ...

Thanks for the advice you two, was sure to edit my misspelling of professor. :| Screw-up on my part there. when she tells him the school is to close immediately ...

Ooo, the plot thickens. I liked this chapter, much more than the first. Evidence of that would be that when I got to the song I added a tune to ...

Heh, good point, I was so excited to finally get the chance to critique other folk's work that I forgot to put important info... Yeah, we'll go with that. 8) ...

So, with any luck this won't come off as a double-post, but no one ever notices the things when I just edit. :| So you sent me a pm asking ...

(This is a quick satirical look at the world of Hogwarts and Harry Potter written by monkeys and thrown together by the organ grinder in no more than an hour. ...

Heh, reading this was nostalgic. Annoyingly enough, everyone I ignored at that age turned out to be right, it is just a phase. I actually quite liked this, it's a ...

Hot damn! The imagery! The metaphor! The pathetic fallacy! To simplify, that was one hell of an excerpt. Not really all that much I can criticize, thankfully. There were certain ...

Alright, this is my first attempt at an analysis, so it's up to you if you want to take what I have to say seriously or not. To start with, ...

Will it be yet another person who slides in, posts one story, advertises his own site and then buggers off? Lets hope not, I don't even have a site. Anyhow, ...