Emma

go you! have a party! Thanks! :oops: Ahem... Stories? Where are yours?!

wow, it is really good. I like it all, and there isn't really much wrong with it. Good work

lol Its good but of course, it didn't catch my eye. If you worked one it, making it stand out more I bet it would be alot better. AND LOLLIPOP ...

I've read the first bit and its really good. I have school to go to so I'll comment after I get back! I really can't wait to read the rest!

What was this all about? That confused me, But it is well written and like I always say, I was addicted to it. Good work!

wow, this was good. Though was did the person in the poem blow?

Wow that is freaky, nice work! Also, my fave part has to be the last, how can you get red rain?!

What? you already had it?

Please dont tell me this is what I think it is... Your thirteen darling!

wow, I had the Muse song: Absolution It so goes together! I love it!

lol Its like you were going to something really good an then you just ruined it with those words at the end... tut tut

*backs away with chocolate* Dis my chocolate leave it alone! Also, thanks for that Mattie, I love ur avvie btw! So cool! And Lollipop dont let me use my piece ...

Wow, somehow it has that feeling which makes me addicted to it! Its unusal in poems... PEOPLE REPLY TO THIS, ITS GOOD. :D

That is really good, it would be better if it was longer. And dont say that you can't write poems, your good just got to make it longer, it would ...

Right.... Im no where as near as good as you dear!