EmilyofREL

And B, I am as American as it gets. I cracked up when you thought that. Sucking face=making out/kissing Donut wrappers=the pieces of plastic that come around tiny pre-packaged donuts. ...

Hi Sarah. Great Job...I like the description and imagery. Great job with that. I couldn't find anything really wrong. Just a few typos that have already been pointed out.

I was cracking up! Not crazy about them being gay, but hey. Some of the nit-picky things the second responder pointed out made the story for me. Like the description ...

Thanks guys. The majority of this is already written, I just have to decide how often to post. :) Glad you enjoyed it. and Bugbug, I agree this chapter needed ...