EmilyRose

That was hilarious. Great twist on the end. :lol: Just a few typos: After eating a healthy runners breakfast Steve was headed to his press runs for Q&A where he ...

Have you ever sat outside and stared up at the sky, hoping to catch a faint twinkle of starlight? Sat there with your neck craned back for ages until your ...

Oooh! I like. :) There were quite a few grammar and spelling mistakes, but I'm too tired to fix them right now. Sorry. :wink: One random question, the Apple, was ...

It's a good start. One thing that makes it easier to read is spacing. After somebody says something, or after a comma or period, you have a space. Example: "What?"I ...