EmilieSturm

haha its okay... although I don't see it twice...

Thanks for the review, it was helpful! I will definitely elaborate on certain parts of future writings. I have not read the picture of Dorian Gray yet, but I heard ...

Thanks so much for your feedback! I now know that I should start the story off a bit slower, so it doesn't feel like readers are pulling G's, haha. I'm ...

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