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Re: Hunter Games (Ch. 1; pt. 1)
Thanks alot! That was the exact kind of critique I was looking for. This is my first sci-fi, and I've been looking for some quality tips on how to make ...
Nov 24, 2009 -
Re: X
I really liked it. And the way you changed your writing style after the first paragraph was interesting. I was drawn in from the "Tap...tap...tap.." Very good! (~) Emi (~)
Aug 30, 2007 -
Re: The Harlequin: Chapter 1 - Watchmen and Golems
Very good. I love the story line and I found little-to-no flaws. Can't wait to read more!
Aug 28, 2007 -
Re: Chapter 1: Part One
Forgive me, I meant to put "Part One". Me fault. I must fix that!
May 2, 2007 -
Re: A Beginning
Sweet! I was entranced. (“Who and said what?” he asked.) That confused me. I couldn't figure out what it meant. Can't wait to read the continuation!
May 2, 2007 -
Re: Frozen in Time
It's beyond me... :elephant:
Apr 30, 2007 -
Re: Michael and Aine #1a
I agree with JCobsesed, there were alot of of stops, and a few typos, but I still loved it. Keep writing! :elephant:
Apr 26, 2007 -
Re: Michael and Aine - Prologue aka Iolayne
I really liked it and hope to read more. It really caught me and drew me in and I saw no real problems. Can't wait for the next piece. :elephant:
Apr 25, 2007